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Q31: some people drive their car when they travel short distances. What is your opinion?
It is a waste of money.
In Korea, oil price is about 3 dollars per liter. It is difficult to me to afford it because I don’t have enough money.
Also, walking short distances is good for your health. You can feel fresh air when you walk.
Q32: In order to draw public attention to global warming, what kind of action can the government take?
Global warming is very serious. If the government do not take action about it, our lives become more difficult.
First, the government should advertise on global warming on the internet to recognize netizen.
Comparing to the effect, its cost is reasonable. Many people will see it. And advertisement banners on the internet can attract many people.
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Q31: some people drive their car when they travel short distances. What is your opinion?It is a waste of money.
>>Correct!In Korea, oil price is about 3 dollars per liter.
>>Correct!
It is difficult to me to afford it because I don’t have enough money.
>>I don\'t have enough monet so it\'s quite difficult fo me to afford such.Also, walking short distances is good for your health.
>>Correct!
You can feel fresh air when you walk.
>>You can feel the fresh air when you walk.Q32: In order to draw public attention to global warming, what kind of action can the government take?Global warming is very serious.
>>Correct!
If the government do not take action about it, our lives become more difficult.
>>Correct!First, the government should advertise on global warming on the internet to recognize netizen.
>>Correct!Comparing to the effect, its cost is reasonable.
>>Correct!
Many people will see it.
>>Many people will notice it.
And advertisement banners on the internet can attract many people.
>>Correct!
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