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Q35: what things we have to be careful when living in the city?
There are so many cars in the city. You should take care of car accidents when you pass by a street.
Also, in the city, air pollution is very serious because of many cars.
Cars make smoke pollution. It is bad for your health.
There are a few people who have serious disease. I recommend living at countryside to them because air is clean.
Q36: what is your favorite kind of movie, and can you tell me the most memorable movie?
I like action film the best. These types of movies usually feature hero and heroine. Action movies offer me incredible experiences by using special effects.
In my case, the most memorable movie is IRON MAN. Actor’s performances were very excellent. Also, Robert Downey junior, the main actor is very handsome and attractive.
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Check them for me then, alright?
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~t. Hannah~
Q35: what things we have to be careful when living in the city?There are so many cars in the city.
>>Correct!
You should take care of car accidents when you pass by a street.
>>One should be very careful when it comes to car accidents espacially when while walking on streets.Also, in the city, air pollution is very serious because of many cars.
>>Correct!Cars make smoke pollution.
>>Correct!
It is bad for your health.
>>Correct!There are a few people who have serious disease.
>>Correct!
I recommend living at countryside to them because air is clean.
>>I recommend them to live in countrysides because of clean air.Q36: what is your favorite kind of movie, and can you tell me the most memorable movie?I like action film the best.
>>Correct!
These types of movies usually feature hero and heroine.
>>These kinds of movies usually have heroes and heroines.
Action movies offer me incredible experiences by using special effects.
>>Correct!In my case, the most memorable movie is IRON MAN.
>>Correct!
Actor’s performances were very excellent.
>>Correct!
Also, Robert Downey junior, the main actor is very handsome and attractive.
>>Correct!
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