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2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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Q37: some people argue that they can exercise more efficiently at the fitness center. Do you agree that? There are many fitness centers in Korea. Its cost is about 100 dollars per month. In a fitness center, there are many experienced trainers. So I can exercise more efficiently with their help. Moreover, I can easily concentrate on my exercise at a fitness center tater then my home. I usually exercise at NEXT fitness located in our apartment complex. There are many experienced trainers and many pieces of exercise equipment. Q38 : are you willing to pay more money for organic product? In Korea, organic product is more expensive than other product. As I am not a rich person, I want to save my money. Of course, organic product is good for my health. But I prefer non organic product because it se cheap. Moreover, a taste of organic foods is not good, usually. I think people should have what they want. It is the best way to stay a happy life.

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[이름]! [이름]! [이름]! Check them right away, compare your answers.^_____^ See yah! ~t. Hannah~ Q37: some people argue that they can exercise more efficiently at the fitness center. Do you agree that?There are many fitness centers in Korea. >>Correct!  Its cost is about 100 dollars per month. >>It costs for about 100 dollars per month.In a fitness center, there are many experienced trainers. >>Correct! So I can exercise more efficiently with their help. >>Correct!Moreover, I can easily concentrate on my exercise at a fitness center tater then my home. >>Moreeover, I can easily concentrate on my exercises better than at home.I usually exercise at NEXT fitness located in our apartment complex. >>Correct! There are many experienced trainers and many pieces of exercise equipment. >>Correct!Q38 : are you willing to pay more money for organic product?In Korea, organic product is more expensive than other product. >>Correct!As I am not a rich person, I want to save my money. >>Correct! >>Since I am not a rich person, I want to save my money.Of course, organic product is good for my health. >>Correct! But I prefer non organic product because it se cheap. >>Correct!Moreover, a taste of organic foods is not good, usually. >>And organic food doesn\'t taste good.  I think people should have what they want. >>Correct! It is the best way to stay a happy life. >>Correct!

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