Practice^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Q41: in order to protect out nature, do you think that use of disposable item should be banned?
I don’t agree that use of disposable item should be banned.
I do not want to waste my time. Disposable item is very convenient.
Of course, using disposable item is bad for our nature, maybe.
But there are many other things that I can do for our nature such as reducing garbage, saving energy, and so on.
I will do that instead of using a disposable item.
Q42 : compared to the past, we spend more hours at work, and we earn money.
In Korea, about ten years ago, we should work on Saturday, even Sunday. It was very annoying me. But these days, I can rest on Saturday and Sunday. It is assured by law. It relives my stress. I can meet my friends and have a good time together on weekend.
Even, my salary has risen.
Overall, compared to the past, we spend fewer hours at work.
강사 첨삭
I only have a few corrections for you in this one.^^
But still check them for me.
~t. Hannah~
Q41: in order to protect out nature, do you think that use of disposable item should be banned?I don’t agree that use of disposable item should be banned.
>>I do not agree with this.I do not want to waste my time.
>>Correct!
Disposable item is very convenient.
>>Correct!Of course, using disposable item is bad for our nature, maybe.
>>Correct!But there are many other things that I can do for our nature such as reducing garbage, saving energy, and so on.
>>Correct!I will do that instead of using a disposable item.>>Correct!Q42 : compared to the past, we spend more hours at work, and we earn money.In Korea, about ten years ago, we should work on Saturday, even Sunday.
>>In korea, years ago, employees are required to work on Saturdays and even on Sundays.
It was very annoying me.
>>It was very annoying.
>>It annoyed me a lot.
But these days, I can rest on Saturday and Sunday.
>>Correct!
It is assured by law.
>>Correct!
It relives my stress.
>>Correct!
I can meet my friends and have a good time together on weekend.
>>Correct!Even, my salary has risen.
>>My salary even increased.Overall, compared to the past, we spend fewer hours at work.
>>Correct!
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