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Q 43: compared to the past, some people are not very close to their relatives. Why?
I guess some people should work for a long time at work because they live in capitalistic country.
>>I guess some people should work for a long time at work because they live in a capitalist country.
Maybe, they should earn a lot of money.
>>Correct!
And, it seems people prefer a small family rater than a large family because of a living cost.
>>And it seems, some people prefer to have a small family rather than a large one because of the cost of living.
I think it is the reason that people are not very close to their relatives compared to the past.
>>I think this is why people are not very close to their relatives unlike in the past.
Let me take an example of my case, I don’t have enough time to meet my relatives frequently.
>>Let us take for example my case. I don\'t have enough time to meet my relatives frequently.
Q44: do you think that spending time with or friends is a waste of time?
Actually, I don’t’ have enough time to meet my friends frequently.
>>Correct!
But I want to meet my friends as much as possible because it relives my stress.
>>Correct [relieves]
I usually play soccer with my friends on weekend even though I don’t have enough time.
>>I usually play soccer with my friends on weekends even though I don\'t have enough time to do so.
It is good for my health.
>>Correct!
I can feel fresh air when playing soccer.
>>I can feel the fresh air when I play soccer.
Moreover, I can feel closer with my friends
>>Moreover, I can feel like I am closer to my friends.
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