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Q45: what are the good points and hard points of working in the transnational corporation?
There are many advantages on working at the international corporation.
Actually, I am an active person. So I want to experience many things. If I work at the international corporation, I can learn other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so for.
And I can meet many foreigners and visit lots of places. Maybe it will enhance my English skill.
On the other hand, if I work at an international corporation, I should talk in other languages. It would be stressful to me. Honestly, I am not used to speak in English.
Q46: old doctors are more proficient with their job, because they have a lot of experience. Do you agree?
I agree that old doctors have many experience rather than young doctors.
They spent tons of time with their patients. So they usually know exactly what patients need.
Moreover, they have good communication skill rather than young doctors.
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Q45: what are the good points and hard points of working in the transnational corporation?There are many advantages on working at the international corporation.
>>There are many advantages in working in an international corporation.Actually, I am an active person.
>>Correct!
So I want to experience many things.
>>Correct!
If I work at the international corporation, I can learn other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so for.
>>If I work in such, i can learn many things, and so on and so forth.And I can meet many foreigners and visit lots of places.
>>Correct!
Maybe it will enhance my English skill. >>Correct!
On the other hand, if I work at an international corporation, I should talk in other languages.
>>Correct!
It would be stressful to me.
>>Correct!
Honestly, I am not used to speak in English.>>Correct!Q46: old doctors are more proficient with their job, because they have a lot of experience. Do you agree?I agree that old doctors have many experience rather than young doctors.>>Correct!
They spent tons of time with their patients.
>>Correct!
So they usually know exactly what patients need.
>>Correct!Moreover, they have good communication skill rather than young doctors.
>>Correct!
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