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2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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So they can lead surgery team efficiently. Let me take an example of my case. Last month, I got a cold. And I got a treatment from one old doctor. It was very effective to recover my body condition. Q48: these days, we often buy things online. Do you think it is safe? I think online shopping is safe. First, there are many people who use online shopping. So when use a online shopping mall, I usually check customer’s reviews. And, there are many laws to protect customers. In my case, I used to buy products on line such as clothes. I think it guarantees the safe, and I am satisfied with online shopping. I will use it continually. Q49: if your boss is doing some bad things, would you just ignore it or would you report it to upper management? If my boss is making mistake, first, I will try to correct it and talk with a boss about this problem rather than to report it immediately. And I will try not to make his feel bad. All people make mistake. My moss is an ordinary person too.

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A perfect day to you! Kindly check them out again for me.kkk^^ ~t. Hannah~ So they can lead surgery team efficiently.>>Correct! Let me take an example of my case. >>An example here is________. Last month, I got a cold. >>Correct!  And I got a treatment from one old doctor. >>Correct!  It was very effective to recover my body condition.>>It was very effective.Q48: these days, we often buy things online. Do you think it is safe?I think online shopping is safe. >>Correct!First, there are many people who use online shopping. >>Correct! So when use a online shopping mall, I usually check customer’s reviews. >>Correct!And, there are many laws to protect customers. >>Correct!In my case, I used to buy products on line such as clothes. >>Correct!  I think it guarantees the safe, and I am satisfied with online shopping. >>Correct!  I will use it continually.>>I will use it continuously.Q49: if your boss is doing some bad things, would you just ignore it or would you report it to upper management?If my boss is making mistake, first, I will try to correct it and talk with a boss about this problem rather than to report it immediately. >>If my boss commits mistakes, I\'d rather talk him out of it than reporting it right away.  And I will try not to make his feel bad. >>Correct!All people make mistake. >>Correct! My moss is an ordinary person too. >>Everyone makes mistakes.

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