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So they can lead surgery team efficiently.
Let me take an example of my case. Last month, I got a cold. And I got a treatment from one old doctor. It was very effective to recover my body condition.
Q48: these days, we often buy things online. Do you think it is safe?
I think online shopping is safe.
First, there are many people who use online shopping. So when use a online shopping mall, I usually check customer’s reviews.
And, there are many laws to protect customers.
In my case, I used to buy products on line such as clothes. I think it guarantees the safe, and I am satisfied with online shopping. I will use it continually.
Q49: if your boss is doing some bad things, would you just ignore it or would you report it to upper management?
If my boss is making mistake, first, I will try to correct it and talk with a boss about this problem rather than to report it immediately. And I will try not to make his feel bad.
All people make mistake. My moss is an ordinary person too.
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Kindly check them out again for me.kkk^^
~t. Hannah~
So they can lead surgery team efficiently.>>Correct!
Let me take an example of my case.
>>An example here is________.
Last month, I got a cold.
>>Correct!
And I got a treatment from one old doctor.
>>Correct!
It was very effective to recover my body condition.>>It was very effective.Q48: these days, we often buy things online. Do you think it is safe?I think online shopping is safe.
>>Correct!First, there are many people who use online shopping.
>>Correct!
So when use a online shopping mall, I usually check customer’s reviews.
>>Correct!And, there are many laws to protect customers.
>>Correct!In my case, I used to buy products on line such as clothes.
>>Correct!
I think it guarantees the safe, and I am satisfied with online shopping.
>>Correct!
I will use it continually.>>I will use it continuously.Q49: if your boss is doing some bad things, would you just ignore it or would you report it to upper management?If my boss is making mistake, first, I will try to correct it and talk with a boss about this problem rather than to report it immediately.
>>If my boss commits mistakes, I\'d rather talk him out of it than reporting it right away.
And I will try not to make his feel bad.
>>Correct!All people make mistake.
>>Correct!
My moss is an ordinary person too.
>>Everyone makes mistakes.
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