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2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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So he can make a mistake. But if there is a no way except for reporting it, I will do that because it is my most important duty to dedicate to company’s profit. Q50 : do you think that advertisements have huge impact on our decision to buy a product? Advertisements can attract many customers. Actually, these are made for that. Advertisements make me buy products on impulse. Also, products on advertisements look gorgers. I saw the advertisement about a car. I felt strong impulse that I want to buy that. But, fortunately, I could refrain myself. Q51: what sort of advantages we can get by using credit card? It is convenient. I don’t have to carry a lot of cash to buy something. All I have to do is carrying a credit card. Moreover, I can get many advantages from card companies by using credit cards. I can get bonus points and discount. Last week, Last week, I went to OUTBACK stake house and used my credit card. So, I could get 5 percents discount because I have a gold class membership

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Hello [이름]!^^ Check them out!^^, ~t. Hannah~ So he can make a mistake. >>Correct!But if there is a no way except for reporting it, I will do that because it is my most important duty to dedicate to company’s profit.>>Correct!Q50 : do you think that advertisements have huge impact on our decision to buy a product?Advertisements can attract many customers. >>Correct! Actually, these are made for that. >>Correct! Advertisements make me buy products on impulse. >>Correct!Also, products on advertisements look gorgers. >>Products look gorgeous.I saw the advertisement about a car. >>Correct!  I felt strong impulse that I want to buy that. >>Correct!  But, fortunately, I could refrain myself.>>But fortunately, I stopped myself.Q51: what sort of advantages we can get by using credit card?It is convenient. >>Correct!  I don’t have to carry a lot of cash to buy something. >>Correct!All I have to do is carrying a credit card. >>All I have to do is to carry a credit card.Moreover, I can get many advantages from card companies by using credit cards. >>Correct!  I can get bonus points and discount. >>I can get bonuses and discounts.Last week, Last week, I went to OUTBACK stake house and used my credit card. >>Correct! So, I could get 5 percents discount because I have a gold class membership >>Correct!

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