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So he can make a mistake.
But if there is a no way except for reporting it, I will do that because it is my most important duty to dedicate to company’s profit.
Q50 : do you think that advertisements have huge impact on our decision to buy a product?
Advertisements can attract many customers. Actually, these are made for that. Advertisements make me buy products on impulse.
Also, products on advertisements look gorgers.
I saw the advertisement about a car. I felt strong impulse that I want to buy that. But, fortunately, I could refrain myself.
Q51: what sort of advantages we can get by using credit card?
It is convenient. I don’t have to carry a lot of cash to buy something.
All I have to do is carrying a credit card.
Moreover, I can get many advantages from card companies by using credit cards. I can get bonus points and discount.
Last week, Last week, I went to OUTBACK stake house and used my credit card. So, I could get 5 percents discount because I have a gold class membership
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So he can make a mistake.
>>Correct!But if there is a no way except for reporting it, I will do that because it is my most important duty to dedicate to company’s profit.>>Correct!Q50 : do you think that advertisements have huge impact on our decision to buy a product?Advertisements can attract many customers.
>>Correct!
Actually, these are made for that.
>>Correct!
Advertisements make me buy products on impulse.
>>Correct!Also, products on advertisements look gorgers.
>>Products look gorgeous.I saw the advertisement about a car.
>>Correct!
I felt strong impulse that I want to buy that.
>>Correct!
But, fortunately, I could refrain myself.>>But fortunately, I stopped myself.Q51: what sort of advantages we can get by using credit card?It is convenient.
>>Correct!
I don’t have to carry a lot of cash to buy something.
>>Correct!All I have to do is carrying a credit card.
>>All I have to do is to carry a credit card.Moreover, I can get many advantages from card companies by using credit cards.
>>Correct!
I can get bonus points and discount.
>>I can get bonuses and discounts.Last week, Last week, I went to OUTBACK stake house and used my credit card.
>>Correct!
So, I could get 5 percents discount because I have a gold class membership
>>Correct!
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