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Q52 : Tell me some bad side of drinking coffee.
I don’t think that drinking coffee is good.
According to the study, drinking coffee disrupt sleep because of caffeine. A lot of caffeine is bad for health.
Also, a cup of coffee is expensive, in my think. In Korea, a cup of coffee is about 8 dollars. It is burden to me since I’m not a rich person.
I know some fried chicken is 8 dollars too. I want to have a fried chicken rather than coffee. I think drinking coffee is a waste of my money.
Q53 : these days, people are eating too many sweets. Agree?
I agree that. According to the study, 70% of people said that they eat sweet more than 3 times per day.
There are so many kinds of sweets such as candy, cookie, chocolates and so on.
I can buy these easily at a convenient store.
Also, there are many advertisements on sweets.
We can see advertisements everywhere. Sweets look very gorgers and delicious in the advertisement. So I usually buy it on impulse.
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Q52 : Tell me some bad side of drinking coffee.I don’t think that drinking coffee is good.
>>Correct!According to the study, drinking coffee disrupt sleep because of caffeine.
>>Correct!
A lot of caffeine is bad for health.
>>A lot of inatke of caffeine is very bad for a person\'s health.Also, a cup of coffee is expensive, in my think.
>>I also think that too much coffee is expensive.
In Korea, a cup of coffee is about 8 dollars.
>>Correct!
It is burden to me since I’m not a rich person.
>>Correct!I know some fried chicken is 8 dollars too.
>>I know fried chicken is 8 dollars.
I want to have a fried chicken rather than coffee.
>>Correct!
I think drinking coffee is a waste of my money.>>Correct!Q53 : these days, people are eating too many sweets. Agree?I agree that.
>>I agree with this one.
According to the study, 70% of people said that they eat sweet more than 3 times per day.
>>Correct!There are so many kinds of sweets such as candy, cookie, chocolates and so on.
>>Correct!I can buy these easily at a convenient store.
>>Correct!Also, there are many advertisements on sweets.
>>Correct!We can see advertisements everywhere.
>>Correct!
Sweets look very gorgers and delicious in the advertisement.
>>Sweets look yummy.
So I usually buy it on impulse.
>>So I usually buy it without even thinking about it.
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