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Having a lot of sweets and sugar is bad for your health. So I am trying to adjust eating sweets.
Q55 : borrowing books from the library is better that purchasing one every time.
As I’m not rich, I don’t have enough money to buy many books. So I prefer to borrow books rather than buy it.
Also, there are many books that I want to read at the library.
In Korea, one book is about ten dollars but borrowing books is free.
Also, the library of my town is located near my house. So it is very convenient.
Q56 : traveling aboard is very expensive, but many people love to go aboard. Why?
According to the recently study, in Korea, almost 70% percents of university students want to go to aboard as a trip. And, me too. Actually I’m an active person. I want to experience many things. If I go to aboard, I can learn many things such as other country’s food, culture, and so on.
Moreover, I can meet many foreigners and visit tons of places.
Of course, it is expensive. But I don’t care.
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Having a lot of sweets and sugar is bad for your health.
>>Correct!
So I am trying to adjust eating sweets.>>So I am trying to lessen my sweet intakes.Q55 : borrowing books from the library is better that purchasing one every time.As I’m not rich, I don’t have enough money to buy many books.
>>Correct!
So I prefer to borrow books rather than buy it.
>>So prefer to borrow them than buying.Also, there are many books that I want to read at the library.
>>Correct!In Korea, one book is about ten dollars but borrowing books is free.
>>Correct!Also, the library of my town is located near my house.
>>Correct!
So it is very convenient.>>Correct!Q56 : traveling aboard is very expensive, but many people love to go aboard. Why?According to the recently study, in Korea, almost 70% percents of university students want to go to aboard as a trip.
>>Correct!
And, me too.
>>And I do too.
Actually I’m an active person.
>>Correct!
I want to experience many things.
>>Correct!
If I go to aboard, I can learn many things such as other country’s food, culture, and so on.>>When I go abraod, I can learn a lot of things.
Moreover, I can meet many foreigners and visit tons of places.
>>Correct!Of course, it is expensive.
>>Correct!
But I don’t care.
>>Correct!
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