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Last year, I went to the Philippine with my friends. I enjoyed sunshine on the beautiful beach and visit Manila. I could meet many foreigners. It was a memorable experience. Q59 : do you prefer to have a small family or a large family? I prefer to have a small family. According to the recently study, 70 percents of Seoul citizen said that they prefer a small family. I guess, it is because of living cost. If I live in a small family, I will burden a few living cost because there are a few family members. I don’t have to spend a lot of money. Also, I don’t need a large house for a small family. In Korea, a large and good apartment is very expensive. It is about one hundred K dollars. Maybe, people and I can’t afford it

Hello [이름]!^^ Consider my corrections for you below.^^ See you! ~t. Hannah~ Last year, I went to the Philippine with my friends. >>Lat year, I went to vist the Philippines with my friend. I enjoyed sunshine on the beautiful beach and visit Manila. >>I enjoyed the sunshine on the beautiful beaches and visited Manila too. I could meet many foreigners. >>Correct!  It was a memorable experience.>>Correct!Q59 : do you prefer to have a small family or a large family?I prefer to have a small family. >>Correct! According to the recent study, 70 percents of Seoul citizen said that they prefer a small family. >>Correct!  I guess, it is because of living cost. >>Correct!  If I live in a small family, I will burden a few living cost because there are a few family members. >>If I have a small family, I will not worry about expenses since I only have a few members with me.  I don’t have to spend a lot of money. >>Correct!Also, I don’t need a large house for a small family. >>Correct! In Korea, a large and good apartment is very expensive. >>Correct! It is about one hundred K dollars. >>Correct!  Maybe, people and I can’t afford it Maybe, not just me, but all the people cannot afford that.