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Q60 : when choosing a car, what is your main consideration? : price, design, and fuel efficiency.
My main consideration is fuel efficiency. As I’m not a rich person, I don’t want to waste of money for oil. In Korea, oil price is not cheap. It is about 3 dollars per liter. I want to save my money by driving a car has good fuel efficiency.
Moreover, it is good for our environment because it spend less fuel. It is a global trend.
Let me take an example of my case. Last week, I saw a car advertisement on TV. It said that the car has good fuel efficiency. Many car companies spotlight it.
Q 61: can you trust mass media in your country?
I can trust mass media in Korea.
According to the study, 70% of university students said that they trust mass media. And I am too.
I can get a lot of information from TV, radio, newspaper, and so on.
I can trust that information because there are many laws to oversee making and posting information.
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Q60 : when choosing a car, what is your main consideration? : price, design, and fuel efficiency.My main consideration is fuel efficiency.
>>Correct!
As I’m not a rich person, I don’t want to waste of money for oil.
>>Correct!
In Korea, oil price is not cheap.
>>Correct!
It is about 3 dollars per liter.
>>Correct!
I want to save my money by driving a car has good fuel efficiency.
>>Correct!Moreover, it is good for our environment because it spend less fuel.
>>Correct!
It is a global trend.
>>Correct!Let me take an example of my case.
>>An example here is__________.
Last week, I saw a car advertisement on TV.
>>Correct!
It said that the car has good fuel efficiency.
>>Correct!
Many car companies spotlight it.>>Manu car companies saw it\'s perfect advertisement about such.Q 61: can you trust mass media in your country?I can trust mass media in Korea.
>>Correct!According to the study, 70% of university students said that they trust mass media.
>>Correct!
And I am too.
>>And I do too.I can get a lot of information from TV, radio, newspaper, and so on.
>>Correct!I can trust that information because there are many laws to oversee making and posting information.
>>I can trust ithe information they share to the public sinceI know that the government has laws implemented about media.
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