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2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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On the other hand, if I go to outside and watch a game with my friends, it would be more fun. Also, I can feel closer with my friends. Q64: if you receive a bonus from your company, would you want to spend it on entertainment or save the money? If I receive a bonus from my company, I want to spend it on entertainment especially on a aboard trip. Of course, traveling expenses are usually expensive. But I don’t care. Last year, I received a bonus from my company. So I went to the Philippine as a aboard trip. it was about 6 hundred dollars. But I could get and experience more than the cost

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A happy Friday to you my dear [이름]!^^ Kindly check the answers and corrections I made. See you! ~t. Hannah~ On the other hand, if I go to outside and watch a game with my friends, it would be more fun. >>On the other hand, if I go out with my friends and watch a game, it would be so much fun! Also, I can feel closer with my friends.>>I can get closer to my friends.Q64: if you receive a bonus from your company, would you want to spend it on entertainment or save the money?If I receive a bonus from my company, I want to spend it on entertainment especially on a aboard trip. >>Correct! >>On an abroad trip.Of course, traveling expenses are usually expensive. >>Correct! But I don’t care.>>Correct! Last year, I received a bonus from my company. >>Correct! So I went to the Philippine as a aboard trip. >>So I visited the Philippines using that.  it was about 6 hundred dollars. >>Correct!  But I could get and experience more than the cost . >>Correct! OR>>But I actually experienced more than what I paid for.

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