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On the other hand, if I go to outside and watch a game with my friends, it would be more fun. Also, I can feel closer with my friends.
Q64: if you receive a bonus from your company, would you want to spend it on entertainment or save the money?
If I receive a bonus from my company, I want to spend it on entertainment especially on a aboard trip.
Of course, traveling expenses are usually expensive. But I don’t care.
Last year, I received a bonus from my company. So I went to the Philippine as a aboard trip. it was about 6 hundred dollars. But I could get and experience more than the cost
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On the other hand, if I go to outside and watch a game with my friends, it would be more fun.
>>On the other hand, if I go out with my friends and watch a game, it would be so much fun!
Also, I can feel closer with my friends.>>I can get closer to my friends.Q64: if you receive a bonus from your company, would you want to spend it on entertainment or save the money?If I receive a bonus from my company, I want to spend it on entertainment especially on a aboard trip.
>>Correct!
>>On an abroad trip.Of course, traveling expenses are usually expensive.
>>Correct!
But I don’t care.>>Correct!
Last year, I received a bonus from my company.
>>Correct!
So I went to the Philippine as a aboard trip.
>>So I visited the Philippines using that.
it was about 6 hundred dollars.
>>Correct!
But I could get and experience more than the cost .
>>Correct!
OR>>But I actually experienced more than what I paid for.
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