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강사 첨삭
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Farmers produce food.
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Without food, we can’t live or survive.
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So farmers are very important in our society.
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If there are no farmers, we can’t easily have food we want.
>>If there are no farmers, we can\'t easily have the food the we want.
There are many farmers who have financial problems in Korea.
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Many of them say that FTA makes their lives more difficult.
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Scientists find new theories or knowledge.
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These make our lives more convenient.
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So scientists are very important in our society.
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If there are no scientists, our society can’t advance anymore.
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But there are so many scientists who have financial problems in Korea.
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They can’t concentrate on their study.
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Lawyers take care of conflicts between people.
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They usually try to make justice.
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In is very important to our society.
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If there are no lawyers, our society will become chaos.
>>If there are no lawyers, our society will be in chaos.
But there are some lawyers who are not interested in making justice.
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Most of them just consider their career and money.
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