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Doctors take care of patients. When we get an illness, we need their help. We have to get prescriptions from doctors to get drugs. It is very important. If there are no doctors, our lives become difficult. We can’t heal our disease without doctors. Our health becomes worse. In Korea, these days, the economy status is pretty bad. People said the economy is in recession. So getting a job is more difficult compared to the past. Companies deceased the number of new recruits they hire just a few people because of the recession. So students are studying harder compared to the past. If they do not such, they can’t get a good job. The unemployment problem is very serious. According to the recent article, specialist said that the unemployment rate is about 10% in Korea. The government should do something to solve this problem. If not, our society will regress.

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 Doctors take care of patients. 

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When we get an illness, we need their help.

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>> OR: When we get sick, we need their help.

We have to get prescriptions from doctors to get drugs.

>> CORRECT

It is very important.

>> CORRECT

If there are no doctors, our lives become difficult.

>> CORRECT

We can’t heal our disease without doctors.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: Our diseases will not be healed without the doctor\'s help.

Our health becomes worse.
>> CORRECT

>> OR: Our health can get worse.
In Korea, these days, the economy status is pretty bad.

>> These days in Korea, the economic status is bad.

People said the economy is in recession.

>> CORRECT

>> OR:  They say the economy is in recession.
So getting a job is more difficult compared to the past.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: So getting a job is more difficult compared before.

Companies deceased the number of new recruits they hire just a few people because of the recession.
>> Companies decrease the number of new recruits/employees and they just hire/retain few people because of the recession.

So students are studying harder compared to the past.

>> CORRECT

 If they do not such, they can’t get a good job.

>> If they do not do such thing, they can\'t get a good job.

 The unemployment problem is very serious.

>> CORRECT

According to the recent article, specialist said that the unemployment rate is about 10% in Korea.

>> According to the recent/latest article, specialist say/ specialists said that the unemployment rate in Korea is about 10%.

The government should do something to solve this problem.

>> CORRECT

If not, our society will regress.

>> CORRECT