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When I am faced with some problems, I prefer to get some help from friends or co-workers rather than taking care of it myself.
Actually, there are so many people who have good talents or knowledge around me. So I can get some advice from them easily. With this, I can save my time and trouble. I want it.
If I take care of the problem myself, it would be hard. I have to spend a lot of time for this
I prefer to take the plane rather than train.
Of course, flight tickets are pretty expensive. It is difficult to me to afford it because I’m not a rich person.
Nevertheless, I want to take the plane because I can save my time a lot. When I go to Busan from Seoul, if I take the train, it takes about 8 hours. But if I take, it takes about just thirty minutes.
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Hi!Thanks a lot for sending this in.It is always my pleasure to go over your work.^^You did a fine job here.Two thumbs up for you!^^See you!
When I am faced with some problems, I prefer to get some help from friends or co-workers rather than taking care of it myself.
>>Correct!Actually, there are so many people who have good talents or knowledge around me.
>>Correct!
So I can get some advice from them easily.
>>Correct!
With this, I can save my time and trouble. I want it.
>>Correct!If I take care of the problem myself, it would be hard.
>>Correct!
I have to spend a lot of time for this>>Correct!I prefer to take the plane rather than train.
>>Correct!Of course, flight tickets are pretty expensive.
>>Correct!
It is difficult to me to afford it because I’m not a rich person.
>>I can\'r afford it because I am not rich.Nevertheless, I want to take the plane because I can save my time a lot.
>>Correct!
When I go to Busan from Seoul, if I take the train, it takes about 8 hours.
>>Correct!
But if I take, it takes about just thirty minutes.
>>But if I ride a plane instead, it would just take me about 30 mins.^^
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