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2013-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When I am faced with some problems, I prefer to get some help from friends or co-workers rather than taking care of it myself. Actually, there are so many people who have good talents or knowledge around me. So I can get some advice from them easily. With this, I can save my time and trouble. I want it. If I take care of the problem myself, it would be hard. I have to spend a lot of time for this I prefer to take the plane rather than train. Of course, flight tickets are pretty expensive. It is difficult to me to afford it because I’m not a rich person. Nevertheless, I want to take the plane because I can save my time a lot. When I go to Busan from Seoul, if I take the train, it takes about 8 hours. But if I take, it takes about just thirty minutes.

강사 첨삭

Hi!Thanks a lot for sending this in.It is always my pleasure to go over your work.^^You did a fine job here.Two thumbs up for you!^^See you! When I am faced with some problems, I prefer to get some help from friends or co-workers rather than taking care of it myself. >>Correct!Actually, there are so many people who have good talents or knowledge around me. >>Correct! So I can get some advice from them easily. >>Correct! With this, I can save my time and trouble. I want it. >>Correct!If I take care of the problem myself, it would be hard. >>Correct! I have to spend a lot of time for this>>Correct!I prefer to take the plane rather than train. >>Correct!Of course, flight tickets are pretty expensive. >>Correct! It is difficult to me to afford it because I’m not a rich person. >>I can\'r afford it because I am not rich.Nevertheless, I want to take the plane because I can save my time a lot. >>Correct! When I go to Busan from Seoul, if I take the train, it takes about 8 hours. >>Correct! But if I take, it takes about just thirty minutes. >>But if I ride a plane instead, it would just take me about 30 mins.^^

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