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I have ever met my elementary school friend by chance at the beach. That was the first time after 5 years. I was enjoying with girl friend at the beach. At that time, one guy came to me and said hello. At first, I didn’t know who he is. But after short time, I was able to realize his face. It was really amazing and pleased to meet my old friend accidentally. I introduced him to my girl friend. And after that, he and I went to a pub and drank beer a lot. And we talked about our childhood together. It’s a small world! In February of this year, I went to Philippine for five days, with my friends. It was my first time traveling abroad. I was really excited about it. It took about 5 hours by a plane from KOREA to Philippine. Also, at that time, Korea was cold winter. But Philippine was hot summer. It was really interesting. The place we went was Boracay Island. Do you know Boracay? It is the one of hottest tourist spots in Philippine.

Hello there [이름]!^^ Oh yes, ofcourse I know that place.kkk It\'s a beautiful place to visit but you know there are other interesting becahes here in our place. If you will visit my place again, I\'ll recommend fantastic places to you.kk I hace my corrections and additional sentences for you here. Check them out for me then! See you very soon! Stay handsome! ~t. Hannah~ I have ever met my elementary school friend by chance at the beach. I met my elementary school friend by chance at the beach. That was the first time after 5 years. >>Correct!  I was enjoying with girl friend at the beach. >>I was enyoing our time with my girlfriend at the beach. At that time, one guy came to me and said hello. >>Correct! At first, I didn’t know who he is. >>At first, I didn\'t know who he was. But after short time, I was able to realize his face. >>But after awhile, I realized who he was by looking at his face.  It was really amazing and pleased to meet my old friend accidentally. >>It was realy amazing and I wa pleased to meet my old friend after a very long time.  I introduced him to my girl friend. >>Correct! And after that, he and I went to a pub and drank beer a lot. >>Correct! OR>>After that, my friend and i went to a pub and drank a lot together.  And we talked about our childhood together. >>Correct! OR>>And we talked about our childhood memories together. It’s a small world! >>Correct!In February of this year, I went to Philippine for five days, with my friends. >>Correct!  It was my first time traveling abroad. >>It was my first time to travel abroad. I was really excited about it. >>Correct!  It took about 5 hours by a plane from KOREA to Philippine. >>It took 5 hours from Korea to the Philippines.  Also, at that time, Korea was cold winter. >>Correct! OR>>That time, the waether in Korea was winter.  But Philippine was hot summer. >>Correct!  It was really interesting. >>Correct!The place we went was Boracay Island. >>Correct! Do you know Boracay? >>Correct!(Ofcourse!kkk)  It is the one of hottest tourist spots in Philippine. >>Correct! OR>>It\'s one of the most popular tourist spots in the Philippines.