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2018-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Q..who do you always greet in the morning/afternoon/evening? I always greet my husband and daughter in the morning.l say" good morning l love you all" sometimes also my GOD meet early in the morning.l say "God bless me!!" and then greet to lovely students .l say "good evening" Q..How do you feel when someone greets you? l feel so good.. early homework finish^^ bye! GEMMAR see you tomorrow.. l need to use body language.so much nervous. and l want to speak chance. more and more l will think gald to meet you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! Thanks for doing your homework! ^^ Please consider my corrections and try to use them next time! Have a great day!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Q..who do you always greet in the morning/afternoon/evening?

>>Q. Who do you always greet in the morning/afternoon/evening?
I always greet my husband and daughter in the morning.

>>CORRECT

l say\" good morning l love you all\" sometimes also my GOD meet early in the morning.

>>l say\" good morning l love you all\" sometimes  I also greet GOD early in the morning.

l say \"God bless me!!\"

>>CORRECT
and then greet to lovely students .l say \"good evening\"
>> I also
 greet my  lovely students. l say \"good evening\"
Q..How do you feel when someone greets you?

>>CORRECT
l feel so good.

>>CORRECT
early homework finish^^

>> I finished my homework early.
bye! GEMMAR see you tomorrow..

>> Goodbye Gemma. See you tomorrow.
l need to use body language.so much nervous.

>> l need to use gestures because I\'m nervous.
and l want to speak chance. 

>> And I want to have a chance to speak.
more and more l will think gald to meet you.

>> I will think about it deeply. It was glad to meet you.

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