Practice The \'to-v\'

2021-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Hello? It is hard to writing. But It looks like fun. I start to practicing the \'to-v\'grammar now. now. I make a poem for practicing the \'to-v\' <I think.......> I think, I hope to need more times for get some rest. I think, It need changing to Korea high school\'s self-study after school until 10P.M I think, I can do it and It is not hard to go to great university. Just need my efforts^^ I will go to great university! This is [Name] good plan. I will try It to go to great university. I Can Do It !!!!! .

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^


It is hard to writing.
>> It is hard to write. 

I start to practicing the \'to-v\'grammar now.
>> I\'m starting to practice my grammar. 

I hope to need more times for get some rest.
>> I need more time to get some rest. 

It need changing to Korea high school\'s self-study after school until 10P.M
>> We need to change Korea\'s high school self-study time after school and extend it until 10 P.M. 

It is not hard to go to great university.
>>It is not that hard to go enter a good university. 

Just need my efforts^^
I will go to great university! This is [Name] good plan.
I will try It to go to great university

>>I need more effort. ^^ 
>> I will go to a great university. This is my plan 
>> I will try to enter a good university,. 

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