practice to make sentences with words.(8)

2020-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What\'s your prospect of the most interesting industry in the future?(prospect). 2. It is important that you start a relationship with somebody who has a similar outlook on life. (outlook) 3. The outlook from the window is unbelievable.(outlook) 4. My friends call me \' Thomas\' as a nickname as I have prominent cheekbones.(prominent) 5. The growth of his business is the result of his notable effort. (notable) 6. The development of the new vaccine is the most excellent fruit this year (excellent) 7. Her item was comparatively ordinary among the four items. 8. Some people say crying is a good outlet to release their stress. (outlet) 9. I looked for some nice shoes in an outlet.(outlet) 10. Do not allow children to play with an iron chopstick.they might put the chopstick into an outlet.(outlet) - It depends on the food, but in case of Bibimbap, all ingredients are mixed in one bowl and shared. However, most of the food is taken out.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Here\'s your composition. Well done!

Cheers,
Jean~~

1. What\'s your prospect of the most interesting industry in the future? (prospect).
>> correct

2. It is important that you start a relationship with somebody who has a similar outlook on life. (outlook)
>> correct

3. The outlook from the window is unbelievable.(outlook)
>> correct

4. My friends call me \'Thomas\' as a nickname as I have prominent cheekbones.(prominent)
>> My friends gave me the nickname \"Thomas\" as I have prominent cheekbones. 

5. The growth of his business is the result of his notable effort.
(notable)
>> correct

6. The development of the new vaccine is the most excellent fruit this year. (excellent)
>> correct

7. Her item was comparatively ordinary among the four items.
>> correct

8. Some people say crying is a good outlet to release their stress.
(outlet)
>> Some people say that crying is a good outlet for relieving their stress.

9. I looked for some nice shoes in an outlet.(outlet)
>> correct

10. Do not allow children to play with an iron chopstick. They might put the chopstick into an outlet.(outlet)
>>  Do not allow children to play with an iron chopstick because they might put it into an electrical outlet. (outlet)

- It depends on the food, but in case of Bibimbap, all ingredients are mixed in one bowl and shared. However, most of the food is taken out.
>> It depends on the food, but in the case of bibimbap, all ingredients are mixed in one bowl and shared. However, most of the food is taken out.

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