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2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Introduction This is a picture of a dining room. 2. Description of main characters There is a big table and five chairs including a long chair in the dining room. These are made in wood. On the table, there are two vases containing many flowers and two wooden bowls with chopsticks. 3. Description of surroundings or others There is a painting hanging on the wall. Also there are two lamps on the top. On the left side, large glass windows are located. 4. Assumption of the Picture This looks like a very clean dining room.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Nice job on your homework.
I do know that you\'ll learn and improve your skills in English. Continue to have the passion in learning because that passion can make successful in life.
T. Jeny

1. Introduction
This is a picture of a dining room.
>>correct

2. Description of main characters
There is a big table and five chairs including a long chair in the dining room.
>>There is a big table with five chairs including a long chair.
These are made in wood.
On the table, there are two vases containing many flowers and two wooden bowls with chopsticks.
>>correct
3. Description of surroundings or others
There is a painting hanging on the wall.
>>correct
Also there are two lamps on the top. On the left side, large glass windows are located.
>>There are also two lamps on the top of the cabinet. On the left side, large window glasses are located.
4. Assumption of the Picture
This looks like a very clean dining room.
>>correct

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