pratice and what\'s your take ~
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Great thoughts, Jennifer!
Wedding is very important for couples, but it doesn\'t need to be extravagant. We should be focusing more on saving money that splurging it for a one-day celebration. You were right! We\'re celebrating an important event, and it\'s not the time for us to show off. Have a great day!
~Teacher Eunice
If you have a lot of money, it spends as your likes.( it is up to you to spend it.).
>>> If you have a lot of money, you can buy anything you like. It is up to you if you spend much for it.
However if you hold expensive wedding for your health, people will see your wedding as just like celebrity performance.
>>> However, if you hold an expensive wedding, people will see your wedding as a celebrity performance.
It is not a place to wish the bride and groom well-being.
>>> It is not a place to wish for the bride and groom\'s well-being.
My opinion may differ people to people, but I think it’s real wedding to celebrate the true love of those who truly know me and those who love me.
>>> My opinion may differ from people, but I think the real wedding is to celebrate with those who truly know /love me.
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