pray~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
God who has a lot of love. Thank you for allowing us to gather together and pray together today, and for your great grace. Just as the ground hardens after the rain and the plum blossoms that announce spring firmly overcome the winter cold, let the difficulties and problems that we are experiencing become nourishment for everyone\'s lives and grow into precious children of the Lord, knowing each other\'s preciousness and practicing sharing and consideration.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Great prayer! Thank you so much!
-James
God who has a lot of love.
>>> CORRECT
>>>OR: Our loving God.
Thank you for allowing us to gather together and pray together today, and for your great grace.
>>> CORRECT
Just as the ground hardens after the rain and the plum blossoms that announce spring firmly overcome the winter cold, let the difficulties and problems that we are experiencing become nourishment for everyone\'s lives and grow into precious children of the Lord, knowing each other\'s preciousness and practicing sharing and consideration.
>>>Just as the ground hardens after the rain and the plum blossoms that announce spring firmly overcome the winter cold, let the difficulties and problems that we are experiencing become nourishment for everyone\'s lives and grow into precious children of the Lord, knowing each other\'s preciousness. Practicing, sharing and consideration.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.