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Hi [이름]! You did a good job on this homework. Thank you. You may just have misplaced some adverbs in your sentences. Check out some corrections I made on your work.
--T.May
When I stare for myself, honestly I like to what I say but I\'m the man who endeavors to do things.
>>When I look at myself, I honestly like what I say, but I\'m actually a man who endeavors to do things.
>>When I look at myself, I honestly prefer the things that I say, but I actually prefer to do things.
I think that someone who only says things is very easy.
>>I think that someone who only says things has an easy life.
But to do anything is different, because the thing have to do directly for oneself.
>>But to do something is different, because something has to be done directly by one\'s self.
For example, in case of a company employee, they have to do their things according to the position.
>>For example, in case of a company employee, he has to do things according to his position.
If team leader orders a staff his works in spite of one\'s own affairs, it is a crime.
>> If a team leader orders a staff to do his tasks but does personal affairs instead, it is a crime.
But the staff must do the things because of only boss\'s dictation.
>>But the staff must do the tasks because he only follows his boss\'s command.
So I always have to endeavor to do directly things rather than only says.
>>So I always have to endeavor to do things directly rather than only saying them.
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