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2012-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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*** What is your favorite part of the day? Why^^ I like the most.I get a english phone class and after that time. because That was a my today's last time. It had a my last funny time. To talk with theacher and using kakao talk with my friends. That's life happiness part of my life. ^^ P.S If i do this theacher can read more easily.^^ Have a good mornig^^

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear [이름] .^__^.   You are very sweet and kind. Thank you very much. I hope it\'s not sava-sava.. kkkk.. Me too, I am so happy to exchange dialogues with you from Mondays to Fridays.^^ I hope you will continuously enjoy our class until the last possible time we will be together.   Anyway, thank you for sending me your composition. You always try to do your best, and I\'m happy for that. Take care for now and I\'ll call you later. Have a fun fun time. See ya my dear [이름]^^ Janette~   *** What is your favorite part of the day? Why^^ I like the most.I get a english phone class and after that time. because That was a my today\'s last time. It had a my last funny time. To talk with theacher and using kakao talk with my friends. That\'s life happiness part of my life. ^^ >>What I like the most is having my phone English class with my teacher and having a kakao talk with my friends. That\'s one of my happiness in life!P.S If i do this theacher can read more easily.^^ Have a good mornig^^ >>P.S If i do this,my teacher can read more easily.^^ Have a good morning^^  

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