Precious time
학생이 쓴 원문
It is not good to waste a lot of time in our lives.
You said yesterday, \"time is flying so fast.“
I usually live by keeping fixed my routines.
However, sometimes we need to spend time without purpose when we need a rest.
In order to use the time given us well, we have to know our life\'s target, and then we do our best time and work given to achieve it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I completely agree with you.
I think not many people appreciate the importance of time.
That\'s why we always haver to remind our loved ones.
Time is f[이름]ting.
Let\'s make the most out of it.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is not good to waste a lot of time in our lives.
>> Correct
You said yesterday, \"time is flying so fast.“
You said yesterday, \"time is flying so fast.“
>> You said yesterday, \"Time is flying by so fast.“
I usually live by keeping fixed my routines.
I usually live by keeping fixed my routines.
>> I usually live by following a routine.
However, sometimes we need to spend time without purpose when we need a rest.
However, sometimes we need to spend time without purpose when we need a rest.
>> However, sometimes we need to spend time without a purpose when we need rest.
In order to use the time given us well, we have to know our life\'s target, and then we do our best time and work given to achieve it.
In order to use the time given us well, we have to know our life\'s target, and then we do our best time and work given to achieve it.
>> In order to use the time given to us well, we have to know our life\'s target, and then we do our best with the time and work given to achieve it.
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