Precious water
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy drinking enough water for my health.
I am always drinking water more than two liters a day.
Water is very precious in our lives because we can\'t live without one.
However I don’t think many people realize its importance because water is abundant in my country.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I enjoy drinking enough water for my health.
>> Correct
I am always drinking water more than two liters a day.
I am always drinking water more than two liters a day.
>> I am always drinking more than two liters of water a day.
Water is very precious in our lives because we can\'t live without one.
Water is very precious in our lives because we can\'t live without one.
>> Water is very precious in our lives because we can\'t live without it.
However I don’t think many people realize its importance because water is abundant in my country.
However I don’t think many people realize its importance because water is abundant in my country.
>> Correct
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