prefer taking shower or bath?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer take a shower these days, because as I am getting older my skin is getting drier and my face got blushed when I take a bath.
However, I really like to take a bath just for relaxing. It heals my head clear, stress released, and I could sleep so deeply.
I feel bad that I can not go to the sauna and hot spring after Covid pandemic.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
These are good sentence patterns.
They are very clear and direct to the point.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I prefer take a shower these days, because as I am getting older my skin is getting drier and my face got blushed when I take a bath.
>> I prefer taking a shower these days, because as I am getting older, my skin is getting drier and my face turns red when I take a bath.
However, I really like to take a bath just for relaxing.
However, I really like to take a bath just for relaxing.
>> Correct
It heals my head clear, stress released, and I could sleep so deeply.
>> It clears my head, releases my stress and I could also sleep so deeply.
I feel bad that I can not go to the sauna and hot spring after Covid pandemic.
I feel bad that I can not go to the sauna and hot spring after Covid pandemic.
>> I feel bad that I can not go to the sauna and hot spring after the COVID pandemic hit.
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