prefer to spend time with one or two close friends or with a large group of people
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I prefer to spend time with a small number of friends like 3 or 5 people in a group. In men’s world, it is somewhat awkward and uncomfortable for only two people to meet and spend time together unless you are an intimate friend of him. It is also not efficient to talk and communicate if a group consists of more than 5 people. The appropriate size of a group for gathering and being socialized is 3 to 5 people including myself. When there are a lot of people in a group, it is really difficult to pay attention to a person who speaks. People tend to talk to a person beside you so that a small sub-group could be typically created within the group when you are having a meeting. Moreover a large group could hinder you from having an in-depth discussion with your friends. It is much easier to share your stories with your friends in a small group rather than a big group.
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I do agree with you, it is better to spend time with a small group because you can easily understand each other.
It is more comfortable to share your worries and opinions. How often do you meet your bestfriend?
Can you tell me about it later in class? See you!
Teacher Nina
I prefer to spend time with a small number of friends like 3 or 5 people in a group.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I prefer to spend time wtih a small group like three to five friends.
In men’s world, it is somewhat awkward and uncomfortable for only two people to meet and spend time together unless you are an intimate friend of him.
>> Did you mean: For men, it is somewhat awkward and uncomfortable for two people to meet and spend time together unless you are an intimate friend of him.
It is also not efficient to talk and communicate if a group consists of more than 5 people.
>> Correct!
The appropriate size of a group for gathering and being socialized is 3 to 5 people including myself.
>> Did you mean: The appropriate size of a group for gathering and socializing is three to five persons including myself.
>> OR: The appropriate number of people for gathering and socializing is about three to five persons including myself.
When there are a lot of people in a group, it is really difficult to pay attention to a person who speaks.
>> When there are a lot of people in a group, it is really difficult to pay attention to the person who is speaking.
People tend to talk to a person beside you so that a small sub-group could be typically created within the group when you are having a meeting.
>> People tend to talk to the person beside him/her so a small sub-group could be typically created within the group when you are having a meeting.
Moreover a large group could hinder you from having an in-depth discussion with your friends.
>> Correct!
It is much easier to share your stories with your friends in a small group rather than a big group.
>> Correct!
>> OR: It is much easier to share your stories with a small group rather than a big group of friends.
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