Pregnancy
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You need to visit the hospital regularly from now on to check you and your baby's health. I would also like to see your husband at our next appointment. There will be many changes that will happen to you, so if he understands what is happening he can give you support and help you. Also while you are pregnant a balanced diet is very important for your baby's development. It would also be good for you to take multivitamins for pregnant women such as folate and iron supplements. We have a great program here at the hospital to give pregnant women support and advice. If you are interested, I would like to refer you to that program. What do you think?
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Your corrections^^
Will talk to you soon.
Have a nice day :D
You need to visit the hospital regularly from now on to check you and your baby's health.
=You need to visit the hospital from now on for you and your baby’s health check up.
I would also like to see your husband at our next appointment.
=correct
There will be many changes that will happen to you, so if he understands what is happening he can give you support and help you.
=There will be many changes that will happen to you, so if he understands them then he can help and support you.
Also, while you are pregnant; a balanced diet is very important for your baby's development.
=Correct
It would also be good for you to take multivitamins for pregnant women such as folate and iron supplements.
=Correct
We have a great program here at the hospital to give pregnant women support and advice.
=We have a great program here at the hospital which supports and council pregnant women.
If you are interested, I would like to refer you to that program.
=Correct
What do you think?
=Correct
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