Pregnent
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I am pregnent, and now it's 8 months, and also my younger bother's wife is pregnent at the same time.
The due date is same as the end of June.
Now my mom cares my 18 months daughter. I am very thanks to her.
2 babies will born in June at a time, and my daughter is still needed her hand. I am going to take a rest for 3 months and go back to the work. I want my mom care my 2 babies, and my younger brother's family also need her help. Then, it's gonna be more difficult time for my mom. We planded to hire baby sitter for a while.
I don't know that I can management this situation.
It's clear that birth of baby take me the great happyness.
Meanwhile, the pressure of babay care is too heavy for me now.
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Hi Ms. [이름]. It's great that you have time to write down this letter. Here are some revision that you can check on.
I am pregnent, and now it's 8 months, and also my younger bother's wife is pregnent at the same time. >> I am 8 months pregnant and my sister-in-law is also 8 months pregnant.
The due date is same as the end of June.
>>Our due date will be at the end of June. Now my mom cares my 18 months daughter.
>>For now, my mom takes care of my 18 month daughter.
I am very thanks to her.
>>I'am really grateful to her.2 babies will born in June at a time, and my daughter is still needed her hand.
>>There will be two babies in June and my daughter still needs to be taken cared of by my mother.
I am going to take a rest for 3 months and go back to the work.
>>I am going to take a rest for 3 months and then go back to work.
I want my mom care my 2 babies, and my younger brother's family also need her help.
>>I want my mom to take care of my 2 babies but my younger brother needs my mom's help too.
Then, it's gonna be more difficult time for my mom. We planded to hire baby sitter for a while.
>>It's going to be a tough time for my mom.
>>We plan to take in a babysitter for awhile. I don't know that I can management this situation.
>>I don't know if I can manage this situation It's clear that birth of baby take me the great happyness.
>>It's true that my newborn baby will give me happiness.Meanwhile, the pressure of babay care is too heavy for me now.
>>But the pressure of taking care of my baby is great for me now.
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