prejudice.
학생이 쓴 원문
Jenny. you've known that I have another position. I just finished first project. Actually not perfect but there is a just little task. for the task I have a partner who is my team member. At first time, I didn't hate him. I didn't know well him and he didn't give me any discomfort. know him more, he has gave me a disapoint. I think he is not diligent guy. I don't want to hate someone. whenever I felt disapoint at him, I tried to be a soft heart person. but whenever he acted like a selfish and lazy person, my determination have gone away. I think my opinion about him was come from prejudice. I heard it he has got a pay cut by his inability at work. because of it, I think he is a inablity person. Does prejudice make me uneasy work with him?
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I guess we can’t avoid this kind of situation. Each person has a unique personality that we can not change. We can’t expect all people to work as diligently as we do also. This is a challenge which we need to overcome especially in the workplace. Team work is important and setting aside differences is necessary. Maybe you need to talk to him about it. It helps to be assertive most of the time. It might also help him to a better person, an efficient co-worker and a better worker in your company.
Talk with you in class tomorrow!
XOXO,
Jenny
Here are the corrections:
Jenny. you've known that I have another position.
>> Jenny, I am aware that you know about my other position.
I just finished first project.
>>I just finished the first project.
Actually not perfect but there is a just little task. for the task I have a partner who is my team member.
>> Actually, it was not perfect but it’s just a simple task and I have a partner who is also my team member.
At first time, I didn't hate him.
>>I didn’t hate him at first.
I didn't know well him and he didn't give me any discomfort.
>> I didn’t know him well and he didn’t make me feel uneasy.
know him more, he has gave me a disapoint.
>>But, as I got to know him more, I am becoming disappointed.
I think he is not diligent guy.
>> I think he is not a diligent guy.
I don't want to hate someone.
>> Correct.
whenever I felt disapoint at him, I tried to be a soft heart person.
>>Whenever I feel disappointed at him, I try to be a soft-hearted
but whenever he acted like a selfish and lazy person, my determination have gone away.
>> When he starts to get lazy and selfish, I just lose my determination.
I think my opinion about him was come from prejudice.
>>I think my opinion of him is because of my prejudice.
I heard it he has got a pay cut by his inability at work.
>> I heard he got his salary cut because of his incapability.
because of it, I think he is a inablity person.
>>Because of that, I always see him as an incompetent person.
Does prejudice make me uneasy work with him?
>> Will my prejudice make me feel uneasy to work with him?
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