prejudices
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1. Their prejudices against each other between two provinces of Kyungsangdo and Julado might have been originated from their history. According to the ancient history, the present Kyungsnangdo was overall belonged to Shilla and the present Jullado to Backje . These two neighbored countries frequently fought due to their territory, and Baeckje were finally surrendered to the allies of Shilla and China in the last fatal war.
2. The Japanese colonizers had prejudiced us as an under illuminated nation. They made use of this distorted idea to justify their colonization during their occupation.
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1. Their prejudices against each other between two provinces of Kyungsangdo and Julado might have been originated from their history.
>>The prejudices between the two provinces, Kyungsangdo and Julado might have been originated from their history.
According to the ancient history, the present Kyungsnangdo belonged to/was under Shilla and the present Jullado to Backje .
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