prep of interview
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I have various recruiting and consulting experience in staffing field such as of dispatched worker and outsourcing service.
>> I have various recruiting and consulting experiences in the staffing field such as being a dispatched worker and outsourcing service.
Through this job, I learned many things and I think it’s a rewarding job for me because most of candidates are junior and I could consult and looking for right position to suitable company.
>> Through this job, I learned a lot of things and I think it\'s a rewarding job for me because most
But there are many challenges and restrictive condition in staffing service field based on labor law in Korea.
>> But there are a lot of challenges and restrictive conditions in the staffing service field that are based on the law of labor in Korea.
The reason why I would like to move to new job is that I would like to expand my work area and develop my recruiting skills
>> The reason why I want to move to this new job is because I would like to expand my work area and develop my recruiting skills.
I understand that for this position of senior recruiter, your are looking for someone like me.
>> I understand that this position are for Senior recruiters. And I believe that you are looking for applicants like me.
I believe I am well matched with this position and If you give me a chance to join your company, I will do my best.
>> I believe that I am well matched with this position. and if you could give me a chance to join your company, I will do my best.
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No other comments follows :D I think you are ready ^^
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