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학생이 쓴 원문
marily monroes beauty completed is mole.so the beauty of Korea completed have to neeed dokdo.
the beauty of Korea described.they hope they to win for diplomacy.
they're doing many advertisments i think it's the most important that domestic diplomatic activity need more.
first problem is diplomatic activity. before i said.
second problem has been fighting for a long time ago.
since i was young, Two countries fighted and i think korean has a sense of inferiority about Japanese.
because my country was governed from japan.
i knew our nation name was Corea but Japan changed, The reason is alphabet c fater than j.
so my nation name made Korea.i educated in military officer course.
i guess Koreans men knew (duty of soldier)
of course, i hate Japan.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Thank you again for making a composition! Good Job! I always enjoy reading your compositions! If you have any questions dont hesitate to ask okay? Dont be sad if your English is not that perfect, first of all, you are trying your best to study and you find time to make a compostition, that is already very good! I am always proud of you for trying. Hopefully the dispute over Dokdo will be resolved soon! Aja! Fighting!
marily monroes beauty completed is mole.
>>Marilyn Monroes mole completes her beauty.
>>Marilyn Monroe is beautiful because of her mole.
>>Marilyn Monroes mole adds to her beauty.
so the beauty of Korea completed have to neeed dokdo.>>So, we need to have Dokdo to complete the beauty of Korea.the beauty of Korea described.they hope they to win for diplomacy.>>The beauty of Korea was described in hopes of winning our diplomacy.theyre doing many advertisments i think its the most important that domestic diplomatic activity need more.
>>Theyre dong many advertisements.
>>I think its important that we increase diplomatic activity. first problem is diplomatic activity.
>>The first problem is on diplomatic activity.
before i said.second problem has been fighting for a long time ago.
>>As I have said before, the second problem is the long history of fighting.
>>As I have said before, the second problem is the fighting over Dokdo which starteda long time ago.
>>*Please make sure to capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence. since i was young, Two countries fighted and i think korean has a sense of inferiority about Japanese. because my country was governed from japan.>>Since I was young, there were already two countries fighting over Dokdo
>>I think that Koreans have a sense of inferiority over the Japanese because Korea was governed by Japan before.i knew our nation name was Corea but Japan changed, The reason is alphabet c fater than j.
>>I knew our nations name was originally Corea but Japan changed it because when you look at the alphabet, the letter C is fatter than J.so my nation name made Korea. >>So, my country made it Korea.
i educated in military officer course.
>>Of course, I learned it from the military.i guess Koreans men knew (duty of soldier)of course,
>>I guess Koreans know this because it is the duty of a soldier to know.
i hate Japan.
>>I hate Japan.
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