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How to prepare for the days of necessity
Fortunately, My town had not been occurred natural disasters.
It's god bless.
My days of necessity is slipping my mind.
I have been not brought the home key and locked the door.
I can't came in home again.
If I thought one more times that I may put something in the house before locking the door, it didn't cause.
Many things like this is cause by me.
So these days, I think one more time, and look arround the place before moving the place.
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Hello Susan!
Thank you for making your homework. Keep it up! See you in class.
T.Faye
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How to prepare for the days of necessity
>>Correct!Fortunately, My town had not been occurred natural disasters.>>Fortunately, my town had never experienced natural disasters.
It\'s god bless.
>>It's God's blessing.My days of necessity is slipping my mind.
>>My days of necessity is when I slip my mind.I have been not brought the home key and locked the door.
>>When I do not bring my home key and/or lock the door.I can\'t came in home again.
>>I can't go inside my home again.If I thought one more times that I may put something in the house before locking the door, it didn\'t cause.>>If I think that I put some thing inside the house before locking thedoor, it doesn't cause anything. Many things like this is cause by me.
>>This things are caused by me.So these days, I think one more time, and look arround the place before moving the place.
>>So these days, I think first one more time and look around the place before leaving.
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