Prepare for my audition and interview

2022-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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In fact, I have two different kind of audition tomorrow. So I will prepare something tonight. Audition time is 11am and 1pm. 11am audition is for play performance, 1pm audition is for musical performance. So when I heard I\'d pass the first step of audition and then I was very busy to memorize act script and song lyrics. Now I\'m memorized already so today night I\'ll sleep early and keep my condition. Pray for my luck:)

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:) 

There is a saying that \"First impressions last\" so we have to make the best out of it. Those are actually god practices to make good impressions. 

PS: Yes, I will pray for you! :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

In fact, I have two different kind of audition tomorrow.
>> In fact, I have two different kinds of audition tomorrow.

So I will prepare something tonight.
>> CORRECT

Audition time is 11am and 1pm.
>> The audition times are 11 am and 1 pm. 

11am audition is for play performance, 1pm audition is for musical performance.
>> The 11 o\'clock audition is for a play performance while the other one is for a musical performance. 

So when I heard I\'d pass the first step of audition and then I was very busy to memorize act script and song lyrics.
>> So when I heard that I passed the first step of audition, I became very busy in memorizing acting scripts and song lyrics. 

Now I\'m memorized already so today night I\'ll sleep early and keep my condition.
>>Now I\'m memorized all of those already so I will sleep early tonight to keep a good condition. 

Pray for my luck:)
>> CORRECT

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