Prepared for the blind date
학생이 쓴 원문
I prepared something for the blind date. I went to the bed early for my condition. And after a shower, I wore CC cream for my skin tone clearly and put on perfume. And I dressed up a dandy clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas!
Going on a blind date is like going on a war. You got to be physically, mentally, and emotionally prepared. Preparation allows you to relax, thrive and be confident, as if you have practiced success.
If you follow everything that I told you in class, you will be surprised how much you will enjoy and just have fun with yourself and your date. Good luck!
Remember that a future action needs \'will\' or \'going to\'. Well done on your homework!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
I went to the bed early for my condition.
>> I went to bed early for my condition.
And after a shower, I wore CC cream for my skin tone clearly and put on perfume.
>> Correct!
And I dressed up a dandy clothes.
>> And I will dress up with dandy clothes.
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