Preperations for G20

To hold G20 successfully, Korean goverment is working very hard. The government has been trying to set up the atmosphere in government office strict. For example, they asked public servants not to take lunch break longer than they have to do or to change their passwords in order to prevent from cyber terror. It is not an exception for the public. The government asked people not to run their cars during G20 and the seoul subway is going to skip the station which the G20 will be held. I see many signs that is hoping for a successful meeting. In addition, they are inspecting parcels and mails adressed to the Coex where is supposed to hold the meeting.

Hi, [이름], Here are the corrections from your composition. I hope it helps,   ---RJ--- To hold G20 successfully, Korean goverment is working very hard. >>> The Korean government is working hard to make G20 summit successful. The government has been trying to set up the atmosphere in government office strict. >>>The government has been trying to establish a strict atmosphere in the government office. For example, they asked public servants not to take lunch break longer than they have to do or to change their passwords in order to prevent from cyber terror. >>>For example, they asked public servants to lessen their lunch break and change their passwords to secure accounts from hackers. It is not an exception for the public. The government asked people not to run their cars during G20 and the seoul subway is going to skip the station which the G20 will be held. >>>(3)The government is asking the people not to drive near the place where G20 is being held. Even the Seoul subway is being suspended to operate while the said summit is going on. No one is exempted. In addition, they are inspecting parcels and mails adressed to the Coex where is supposed to hold the meeting. >>>(4)Inspection of parcels and mails addressed to coex is also being considered. I see many signs that is hoping for a successful meeting. >>>I can see positive signs for a successful summit.