presence

2020-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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my son is a real presence at my life I don,t explain verbally recently most people more like to communicate with verbally presence of a human is a special thing that was born to be loved

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. Keep it up Mrs. [Name]. - T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

my son is a real presence at my life

>> My son\'s presence is important in my life.

I don,t explain verbally

>> I cannot explain it verbally.

recently most people more like to communicate with verbally

>> Recently, most of the people likes to communicate verbally.

presence of a human is a special thing that was born to be loved

>> The presence of a human is special and we are born with it.

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