Present!!
학생이 쓴 원문
*** What was the best present you have received this day?^^
I Want like this question!!!
First, I want have a new smartphone!!!/
i had a lot of stressed about this.
In my family had a smartphone last year and this promise end this year.
So I think my family will change(maybe) but i didn't have a smartphone yet
Every day I really really want have smartphone. Because My cell phone could not play high-end program just Kakao talk, like this.
Say to my mother almost 1year. But score situation is not good.
Because I bought just Old phone. Name is Omnia2. This grduate is over 2years.
If theacher can search 'Omnia2'.
P.S
What is this paragraph mean??
What is '뵒'?
For example:
뷤pening a branch office in China is easier said than done because of all the government regulations.
뷞 warn my students that becoming a successful artist in the real world is much easier said than done..
강사 첨삭
A WONDERFUL WEDNESDAY TO YOU [이름]!!!
It was nice receiving a message from you...So how was your valentine\'s day?Did your family already gave you the smartphone you wished to have?hehehe:)I hope you enjoyed your valentine with your family and friends..I appreciate how you delivered your ideas and opinions in your composition..Let me just help you out with your sentences.ok.So, I hope you will enjoy the rest of the week.Have a nice day.Takecare!
TEaChEr Janette.
<<CORRECTIONS>>
What was the best present you have received this day?^^
>>correct.I Want like this question!!!
>>I like this question!First, I want have a new smartphone!!!/
>>First, I want to have a new smartphone.i had a lot of stressed about this.
>>I feel so stressed about this.In my family had a smartphone last year and this promise end this year.
>>I asked my family to give me a smartphone last year and they promise me to buy one at the end of the year.So I think my family will change(maybe) but i didn\'t have a smartphone yet>>So I think my family will change my phone but, I still don\'t have a smartphone.Every day I really really want have smartphone. Because My cell phone could not play high-end program just Kakao talk, like this.
>>I really wish to have a smartphone everyday..Say to my mother almost 1year. But score situation is not good.
>>I told my mother about this for almost 1 year now but the the result is not good.
Because I bought just Old phone. Name is Omnia2. This grduate is over 2years.>I just bought an old phone which is Omnia2 and I have this for 2 years already.
If theacher can search \'Omnia2\'.
>>Teacher can you search for Omnia2?P.S>>Post scriptWhat is this paragraph mean??
>>What does this paragraph means?What is \'뵒\'?>>What is \'뵒?For example:
>>Correct.뷤pening a branch office in China is easier said than done because of all the government regulations.>>Correct!
뷞 warn my students that becoming a successful artist in the real world is much easier said than done..
>>Correct!.
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