Present!!

2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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*** What was the best present you have received this day?^^ I Want like this question!!! First, I want have a new smartphone!!!/ i had a lot of stressed about this. In my family had a smartphone last year and this promise end this year. So I think my family will change(maybe) but i didn't have a smartphone yet Every day I really really want have smartphone. Because My cell phone could not play high-end program just Kakao talk, like this. Say to my mother almost 1year. But score situation is not good. Because I bought just Old phone. Name is Omnia2. This grduate is over 2years. If theacher can search 'Omnia2'. P.S What is this paragraph mean?? What is '뵒'? For example: 뷤pening a branch office in China is easier said than done because of all the government regulations. 뷞 warn my students that becoming a successful artist in the real world is much easier said than done..

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A WONDERFUL WEDNESDAY TO YOU [이름]!!!                  It was nice receiving a message from you...So how was your valentine\'s day?Did your family already gave you the smartphone you wished to have?hehehe:)I hope you enjoyed your valentine with your family and friends..I appreciate how you delivered your ideas and opinions in your composition..Let me just help you out with your sentences.ok.So, I hope you will enjoy the rest of the week.Have a nice day.Takecare! TEaChEr Janette. <<CORRECTIONS>>  What was the best present you have received this day?^^ >>correct.I Want like this question!!! >>I like this question!First, I want have a new smartphone!!!/ >>First, I want to have a new smartphone.i had a lot of stressed about this. >>I feel so stressed about this.In my family had a smartphone last year and this promise end this year. >>I asked my family to give me a smartphone last year and they promise me to buy one at the end of the year.So I think my family will change(maybe) but i didn\'t have a smartphone yet>>So I think my family will change my phone but, I still don\'t have a smartphone.Every day I really really want have smartphone. Because My cell phone could not play high-end program just Kakao talk, like this. >>I really wish to have a smartphone everyday..Say to my mother almost 1year. But score situation is not good. >>I told my mother about this for almost 1 year now but the the result  is not good. Because I bought just Old phone. Name is Omnia2. This grduate is over 2years.>I just bought an old phone which is Omnia2 and I have this for 2 years already. If theacher can search \'Omnia2\'. >>Teacher can you search for Omnia2?P.S>>Post scriptWhat is this paragraph mean?? >>What does this paragraph means?What is \'&#48466;\'?>>What is \'&#48466?For example: >>Correct.&#48612;pening a branch office in China is easier said than done because of all the government regulations.>>Correct! &#48606; warn my students that becoming a successful artist in the real world is much easier said than done.. >>Correct!.

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