present for parents.
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If I have lots of money, and If I give my parents a present, I will give useful things for them. My parents don\'t want me to buy something useless. They want useful things and serious things as present. Then the examples of useful things are, socks, clothes etc. They don\'t like presents such as expensive and not serious, useless. So I\'ll buy something useful and serious things for them.
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If I have lots of money, and If I give my parents a present, I will give useful things for them.
>> If I had lots of money, and if I had to give my parents presents, I would give them useful things.
My parents don\'t want me to buy something useless.
>> This is a good sentence.
They want useful things and serious things as present.
>> They want useful things and practical things as presents.
Then the examples of useful things are, socks, clothes etc.
>> Examples of useful things are socks, clothes etc.
They don\'t like presents such as expensive and not serious, useless.
>> They don\'t like expensive, impractical and useless presents.
So I\'ll buy something useful and serious things for them.
>> Therefore, I would buy them something useful and practical.
Hi, Daniel! That\'s very smart
of you! You were able to answer the question appropriately. However, please take note of the corrections to help you improve.
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