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Let me talk about Jo Bo ah being viral online.
She is one of the most famous Korean celebrity. She wore ‘Alva Blazer’ on TV Series <Nine-Tailed> episode 2.
The product was exposed well on various scenes in the overall episode. The searching volume of the key word ‘Jo Bo ah’s Blazer, or ‘Daily Look’ increased dramatically on NAVER which is KR’s no.1 portal site. So, As you can see from the result table, we got a total of 26 coverage and also 72,702,280 (Seventy-two million, Seven hundred and two thousand, two hundred eighty) PR value.
In addition to this, celebrity Suzy who is famous around the Asian region wore
Jessie Biker Hoody on Drama and was also uploaded in her IG account.
Suzy has 135M of Instagram followers.
On Page 3, as we mentioned from the previous conference call, we exposed those
two magazines with Leather Jacket in the NOV Issue.
We are planning to use her photo as much as possible in a short-term period. Like the photos during the dress fair. She already had a photo shoot with our Key Dresses, and those pictures has been used on the website during the Dress Fair period. (Nov 08 ~ Nov 18)
We are still having some discussions with bender. But, most of the stickers will serve as illustrators.
So, when we get them, it will be used on Black Friday Event.
The casts for the winter project are influencers who already worked with us.
So, we are planning to shoot a video with various matching styles to show the individuality
of each person’s job.
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