presentation
학생이 쓴 원문
At first, I have been embarrassed with the presentation.
when I attended the software development center in U.S.,
I presented my design programs in front of many foreign
people. And then, I was asked a lot of questions about
the program\'s contents from attendants . And I explained
it to them more calmer.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
It can be nerve-wracking presenting to an international audience. I wonder if you spoke in English during this time. Well, this is truly a wonderful experience! I hope that you can be invited to give some presentation again in the near future.
Thank you for answering your homework question! See you again in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: At first, I have been nervous with the presentation.
when I attended the software development center in U.S.,
I presented my design programs in front of many foreign
people.
>> Correct!
Or: When I attended... (Capital letter \"W\")
And then, I was asked a lot of questions about
the program\'s contents from attendants .
the program\'s contents from attendants .
>> Correct!
And I explained
it to them more calmer.
it to them more calmer.
>> And, I explained
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