Presentation test
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
When you are 64 years old, I think you can\'t do a lot of things.
You\'re going to be weak because of aging. ^^
But your plan is good. I hope you\'ll be able to do that when you\'re 64 years old.
And I hope that you also achieved your goals by then.
See you next week! Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
There was a presentation test about after 50years my life.
>> There was a presentation test about my life after 50 years.
I have to prepare the presentation.
>> I have to prepare for the presentation.
Today was the present day.I present for 2 minutes.
>> Today was the presentation day and I presented for 2 minutes.
After 50 years my age will be 64.I will very old.
>> After 50 years, my age will be 64 and I will be very old.
And I will watch baseball and travel many times.
>> I will watch baseball games and travel a lot when that time comes.
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