Preserve the earth

Lydia Garcia has been dancng since she was nine years old. Expression and movement makes her feel like the world is perfect.Lydia excersed frequently before she began dancing. Dancing for her means that she moves to other world and feels achievement. If there were dancing Lydia Garcia would not feel perfection.The pacific ocean is 25% larger than all of the land surface of world combined. Actually, land surface contiues to decrease.The pacific ocean is a well preseved and protected environment. One of reasons is that land is washed into the sea by rivers. Another reasons is that earth temperature inreases and ice cap are melting, causing the water levels of ocean to rise.

Happy Monday Sophia!! ^_^ Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. Keep it up!^_^ I provided you corrections on some of your sentences. See you in class. Take care!^_^ __Teacher Nica__     Lydia Garcia has been dancing since she was nine years old. >> Correct! Expression and movement makes her feel like the world is perfect. >> Correct! Lydia excersed frequently before she began dancing. >> Lydia does some exercise before she begins to dance. Dancing for her means that she moves to other world and feels achievement. >> For her dancing means like she is like in a another world and she feels achievement for it. If there were dancing Lydia Garcia would not feel perfection. >> For Lydia Garcia, no dancing means no feeling of perfection. The pacific ocean is 25% larger than all of the land surface of world combined. >> The pacific ocean is 25% larger than all of the land surface combined in the world. Actually, land surface contiues to decrease. >> Actually, the land surface continues to decrease. The pacific ocean is a well preseved and protected environment. >> The pacific ocean is well preserved and protected as part of the environment. One of reasons is that land is washed into the sea by rivers. >> Correct! Another reasons is that earth temperature inreases and ice cap are melting, causing the water levels of ocean to rise. >> Correct!