Preserve the future for the next generation

2019-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

I think preserve the future for the next generation is one of our mission. We can preserve the future by improving the technology. But i think this is not my job, the scientists have to do that. Maybe we can encourage them, and give them a compliment.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thanks for this. Well done! Here are some corrections to improve your sentences.

Let\'s talk about this more in class. See you! ^_^

~T.Avery

I think preserve the future for the next generation is one of our mission.

>> I think preserving the future for the next generation is one of our missions.

We can preserve the future by improving the technology.

>> CORRECT

But i think this is not my job, the scientists have to do that.

>> CORRECT

OR>> However, I think this is not my job. The scientists have to do that.

Maybe we can encourage them, and give them a compliment.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Maybe we can encourage them, and give them compliments.

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