president park
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, sir [이름]! :)
How are you?
I hope you\'re doing fine.
I am really curious why you would want to study English hard if you only had 24 hours to live.
I hope you could tell me more in class. ^^,
If I only had 24 hours, I would spend that time with my family and friends.
I am looking forward to hearing form you soon!
See you in class.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
--- Teacher JACEY ^_^)/
President park was impeached today
>> President Park was impeached today.
I think it will be a historic day today
>> I think it will be a historic day today.
>> OR : I think today will a historic day.
>> OR : This is a historic day in South Korea.
That is a relief for sure
>> That is a relief for sure.
And I am glad
>> And I am glad.
>> OR: And I feel delighted.
If you had only 24 hours to live, what would you do?
i will study English hard
>> I will study English hard.
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