President was impeached.

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for telling me what you feel towards ex-president Park Geun-hye.

Notice that I added some details in the correction. This was done so that anyone who reads your essay would understand why there was an impeachment and why there would be a snap election on May.

Additionally, let me give you a tip about writing in English. Avoid starting a sentence with a conjunction (i.e. \"but\", \"because\", \"and\") since this will create a \"sentence fragment\" or an incomplete sentence. Starting a sentence with these words in spoken English is okay but it\'s not okay in written English. If you need to, use synonyms of these words such as \"however\", \"since\", \"additionally\".

All good things,

==Teacher Dianne==

President Park was impeached.And on May they will be a elect.But Park was laughed when she go to her new home.So,it makes me angry.She don\'t know her fault.And she laughed in car.I can\'t understand someone who agree with Park.I don\'t who are going to be elected but I don\'t think there is no very good president.

>> South Korea has 60 days (early May 2017) to elect a new leader after ex-president Park Geun-hye became the country\'s first president to be ousted by impeachment after a panel of justices on Friday upheld a motion to dismiss her over one of the nation\'s biggest influence-peddling scandals.

After this upheaval, Park was shown laughing inside a car on her way to her new residence. Also, she is adamant that she didn\'t commit any wrongdoing. I personally feel anger towards her and I don\'t understand people who still support her. I can only guess who will be elected as the new leader but I think \"good presidents\" don\'t exist.