Pretend you woke up one day and there were no rules
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강사 첨삭
Good day, Sir [이름]!
We already reached the fourth day of the week.
I am so happy that you are always energetic in class.
All of the things you mentioned below are right.
There are a lot of laws nowadays.
People should follow it in order to avoid accidents and fines.
Thank you so much for your composition.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
In primitive times, there were no laws or rules.
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People just obeyed customs and norms that have been created in the community by their ancestors.
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Children grew up learning them naturally without formal education programs.
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In modern society, there are two kinds of rules.
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One is a law that can punish violators and the other one is just common social/cultural norms that require people to follow, although they are not legally binding.
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When a community was small, a law was not necessary because people were governed by its own rules.
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However, as communities grow and become a nation, the inherited customs were not enough to control the society.
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So, the more organized and systematic ways of governing the society have emerged to protect individual’s benefits and improve citizen’s wellbeing.
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Now, we cannot think of our society without laws or rules.
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When they become nullified or are removed all of a sudden, our society will become chaos.
>> When they become nullified or are removed all of a sudden, our society will be in chaos.
Burglary, depredation, and vandalism will be prevalent. \\
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